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1 - Once you've posted, offer your opinions on another song! That's how this whole system works 2 - The people that have posts that are stickied have given more critiques than they've recieved; They are the ones that deserve your critiques the most. (Updated every 6 hours) 3 - One track at a time. 4 - Post the genre in the topic title, e.g. Da Bassman - Bass fo' Brekfazt [Dubstep]
So these vocals weren't recorded for this backing track? You could have fooled me, it feels like a perfect fit. Nothing really sounds like I could suggest any improvements. I'd like to compliment the guitar and bass playing here, I think those parts are very welcome after hearing so many pop dance tracks relying on nothing but pumping synths for their rhythm. The vocals sound like a great performance and recording and like I said, seem to fit right in.
The kick needs to be a bit turned down a bit. A bit too ovewhelming. I love the progression very good. Really made me chill out. Cool track man. It's very ambient it all blends in. It's the perfect blend of ambience and funk
I really like this one! The only thing I can suggest is bring the white noise down in the mix and maybe tweak the envelope on the kick a tad - it does boom a little too much. But other than that, nice work! Keep it up!
I'm just gonna repeat what others have said, but here I go anyway. I want to hear that clap, it's just barely audible atm. The white noise is just a tad too loud and feels a bit distracting. I think the level of the kick is good though, but if you want to make it less housy then maybe take it down a bit. Overall really enjoyable.