interestingly I prefer your first beat to this one
i guess it could be a matter of taste.
in your first beat, everything was very clipped and crisp and sounded really sharp. In this beat you now have this sequenced electro synth sound over the top which is really 'verbed up...
to my ears it sounds incongruous with the crisp beat you have underneath. so i would either tighten up the synth sound - not sequenced, less reverb. or i would add some reverb to the beat and perhaps add a more 'liquid' bass line, pads etc.
in a nutshell - make it lush or crisp, but not a mixture of both! but that's just my opinion...
mixing and mastering sounds phat - in spite of youtube!
look forward to hearing more of your tunes