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1 - Once you've posted, offer your opinions on another song! That's how this whole system works 2 - The people that have posts that are stickied have given more critiques than they've recieved; They are the ones that deserve your critiques the most. (Updated every 6 hours) 3 - One track at a time. 4 - Post the genre in the topic title, e.g. Da Bassman - Bass fo' Brekfazt [Dubstep]
i think the clean vocals on the "brown and crusted" part could be a little more... It's hard to describe it. Growly? My recommendation would be to smoke 3 packs of cigarettes in under an hour and record the vocals again
Other than that, the intro drags a bit but "dat bassline" makes up for the problems I have with the song.
haha, interesting track! I love that you are playing outside the normal confines of the genre. Really cool! The drum re-entry at ~1:40 is really cool, there is definitely some hardcore stuff going on in here bud!
All the weird tempo stuff going on around 4:00 is pretty rad. Way-different! I'd love to throw it in a set and have people be like, "wtf man"!
really like the glitchyness of your track, and it also got like this almost goth alike feeling to it at 1:45 but i dont see the drumstep in it, sounds to me more like breakcore. also i think u can bring your bass synths up a little bit that would add a lot of filthyness. all over great work mate keep it up. also what bpm is this in ?