A remix i made for a friend! COMMENTS? (DUBSTEP)

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A remix i made for a friend! COMMENTS? (DUBSTEP)

Postby fulfordpr » Sat Apr 28, 2012 7:57 pm

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Re: A remix i made for a friend! COMMENTS? (DUBSTEP)

Postby killertomatoism » Sun Apr 29, 2012 10:46 pm

Personally I think there's too many vocals in there, kinda takes the focus away from the rest of the mix for me, the glitchings on the vocals on it are a bit over the top for me aswell. Anychance you could post a link to the original track as well?
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Re: A remix i made for a friend! COMMENTS? (DUBSTEP)

Postby TLBF » Mon Apr 30, 2012 12:15 am

I like it, it's speedy and melodic and has a good beat.
I like my kicks to be dirty so add some more sub man! :D I see what killertomatoism is saying with the vocals, when you repeat, maybe mess with the volume, automate it, drop it and rise it randomly to give even more beat to the track. I don't think the glitching on it is too much though.

The drop is dirty! You need to teach me ;) Well done on that. The drums still cut through well too. The kick could always cut through a bit more. Try some sidechaining on that badass bass.

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Re: A remix i made for a friend! COMMENTS? (DUBSTEP)

Postby Kreepr » Mon Apr 30, 2012 7:27 am

Snare has barely any highs and the vocals are just... idk... dude X) Vocal glitching is not something that you accent and overdo, it needs to be subtle and interesting to the listener. Now, the kick, you should never have your kick hit 3 times in a row, it's just kind of not tasteful, you know?
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