If you're trying to get into mau5trap, then I'm sorry I have to be the one to break it to you
Like... Your kick is WAY to long, that tail and pitchbend are just... distracting and your compression is way over the top. Everything sounds overcompressed and the sub needs to be a bit more saturated. One thing I noticed is that you never build tension there's not a curve in your DB level from start to finish, the soundwave is like a highway X) The snare in every single one of your tracks muds up the mix. Try to EQ it correctly so it still is present, but hits like a mofuker, but leaves as quick as it hits with a bit of high end tailed reverb.
Sorry, but some criticism is needed.