Genremash (pop RnB house)

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Re: Genremash (pop RnB house)

Postby ConfusionGrows » Sat Jun 09, 2012 11:35 pm

So these vocals weren't recorded for this backing track? You could have fooled me, it feels like a perfect fit. Nothing really sounds like I could suggest any improvements. I'd like to compliment the guitar and bass playing here, I think those parts are very welcome after hearing so many pop dance tracks relying on nothing but pumping synths for their rhythm. The vocals sound like a great performance and recording and like I said, seem to fit right in.
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Re: Genremash (pop RnB house)

Postby NoiseResonance » Sun Jun 10, 2012 4:08 am

The kick needs to be a bit turned down a bit. A bit too ovewhelming. I love the progression very good. Really made me chill out. Cool track man. It's very ambient it all blends in. It's the perfect blend of ambience and funk :D
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Re: Genremash (pop RnB house)

Postby SuitablyBrutal92 » Fri Jun 15, 2012 2:01 pm

I really like this one! The only thing I can suggest is bring the white noise down in the mix and maybe tweak the envelope on the kick a tad - it does boom a little too much. But other than that, nice work! Keep it up!
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Re: Genremash (pop RnB house)

Postby Toad Wrench » Mon Jun 25, 2012 1:23 pm

I'm just gonna repeat what others have said, but here I go anyway.
I want to hear that clap, it's just barely audible atm. The white noise is just a tad too loud and feels a bit distracting. I think the level of the kick is good though, but if you want to make it less housy then maybe take it down a bit. Overall really enjoyable.
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