Oblivious [DRUMSTEP/D'N'B]
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Re: Oblivious [DRUMSTEP/D'N'B]
by Exothug » Fri Apr 20, 2012 3:49 pm
the intro is a bit too long imo, the drop is badass, i think the drums could be a bit punchier. great work!
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Re: Oblivious [DRUMSTEP/D'N'B]
by Elementz » Sat Apr 21, 2012 1:44 am
some mental stuff going on here, lots of mental hardcore/gabba stuff, punky/rock style vox, its very different! Very nice work...
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Re: Oblivious [DRUMSTEP/D'N'B]
by Hor1zon » Sat Apr 21, 2012 6:46 am
I love your tracks, so different!
The vox fits perfectly, the intro is perfect. I think it could drop a lot harder, though.
The vox fits perfectly, the intro is perfect. I think it could drop a lot harder, though.
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Re: Oblivious [DRUMSTEP/D'N'B]
by alexmccormax » Sat Apr 21, 2012 6:57 am
i think the clean vocals on the "brown and crusted" part could be a little more... It's hard to describe it. Growly? My recommendation would be to smoke 3 packs of cigarettes in under an hour and record the vocals again 
Other than that, the intro drags a bit but "dat bassline" makes up for the problems I have with the song.
Other than that, the intro drags a bit but "dat bassline" makes up for the problems I have with the song.
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Re: Oblivious [DRUMSTEP/D'N'B]
by mmGhost » Sat Apr 21, 2012 6:12 pm
haha, interesting track! I love that you are playing outside the normal confines of the genre. Really cool! The drum re-entry at ~1:40 is really cool, there is definitely some hardcore stuff going on in here bud!
All the weird tempo stuff going on around 4:00 is pretty rad. Way-different! I'd love to throw it in a set and have people be like, "wtf man"!
All the weird tempo stuff going on around 4:00 is pretty rad. Way-different! I'd love to throw it in a set and have people be like, "wtf man"!
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Re: Oblivious [DRUMSTEP/D'N'B]
by Phase » Sun Apr 22, 2012 10:03 am
Really reminds me of Comprachicos!
The track in general needs some more volume and vibration in the sub levels.
Really experimental though, I quite like it!
The track in general needs some more volume and vibration in the sub levels.
Really experimental though, I quite like it!
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Re: Oblivious [DRUMSTEP/D'N'B]
by GazQwerty » Tue Apr 24, 2012 8:28 pm
Really interesting. I like it a lot!
The bit at 0.55 before the drop scared me tho! Thought my headphones were dying
The bit at 0.55 before the drop scared me tho! Thought my headphones were dying
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Re: Oblivious [DRUMSTEP/D'N'B]
by colinrgodsey » Wed Apr 25, 2012 1:38 am
Very awesome! First drop caught of me off guard, in a good way. Made me crave the high tempo.
Intro was maybe a tad long, drums could be a bit tighter, feels like they have a kinda long release. Cymbals could have more high end (crunchy, saturated), i think there's sonic room up there.
But overall, awesome track!
Intro was maybe a tad long, drums could be a bit tighter, feels like they have a kinda long release. Cymbals could have more high end (crunchy, saturated), i think there's sonic room up there.
But overall, awesome track!
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Re: Oblivious [DRUMSTEP/D'N'B]
by captive » Thu Apr 26, 2012 12:02 am
really like the glitchyness of your track, and it also got like this almost goth alike feeling to it at 1:45
but i dont see the drumstep in it, sounds to me more like breakcore.
also i think u can bring your bass synths up a little bit that would add a lot of filthyness.
all over great work mate keep it up. also what bpm is this in ?
but i dont see the drumstep in it, sounds to me more like breakcore.
also i think u can bring your bass synths up a little bit that would add a lot of filthyness.
all over great work mate keep it up. also what bpm is this in ?
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Re: Oblivious [DRUMSTEP/D'N'B]
by shenron1146 » Mon Apr 30, 2012 11:27 am
Very awesome. I quite enjoyed this. Can't give much advice cause I don't know what was going on. But very experimental and intriguing.
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