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Re: Dungeon

Postby Kreepr » Sat Apr 28, 2012 6:00 pm

interesting oldschool feel.
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Re: Dungeon

Postby BoxPlot » Sat Apr 28, 2012 11:54 pm

I love this reggae vibe dude. sounds smexy as hell. the hats though do seem a bit thin at points. that is all :D
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Re: Dungeon

Postby SUBVER5ION » Mon Apr 30, 2012 7:07 pm

This is wicked! Nice to hear dubstep with a dub feel to it.

Love all the little synth hits and the "brap!" sample as well.... good work!
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Re: Dungeon

Postby MrNiceguy » Sun May 06, 2012 11:40 am

Ahh so much sub.. and who doesnt like a nice donky synth to top it. awesome stuff give us more:)

Abit more repetition of the cooler baselines could be in order. see now i remember that the song was cool but i dont remember any exact melodies or parts of the song
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Re: Dungeon

Postby Rmonik » Thu May 10, 2012 4:07 pm

Love oldskool feel. Sounds really dubby. Try putting a spring reverb on the snare on fully dry and automating the Dry/wet on certain hits, that could work really well. The sub might be a tad too loud, especially the upper octave, add more sub in the octave below (the one you can't or can barely hear).
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Re: Dungeon

Postby NastyDasty » Fri May 11, 2012 1:53 am

Love it, really clean sharp sounds!
Not too much criticism from me.
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Re: Dungeon

Postby Ripley Sterling » Fri May 11, 2012 1:39 pm

alrighty, not gonna read any other comments, just listening to the track so I don't know if you've changed anything yet.

Spooky organs are the best. Wish I could blast this to get the full bass effect, but it's a little early. Are those little 8 bit noises? They're sweet whatever they are. I really like the laughing, the "blat" samples are a little eh to me, kinda makes it cheesy in my opinion. Aaaanddd damn, it's over? That would've been cool to hear much longer dude. It had a really low down chill, but serious vibe.
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Re: Dungeon

Postby Ampcast » Sun May 13, 2012 9:40 pm

This is fucking sick. I know most people probably think its tacky but i like to hear some reverberated knocky snare action on that snare? maybe just me :P
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