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Reason 6 First Track

Postby 42TheFloorBeats » Thu Apr 12, 2012 8:30 pm

Hey its been a while since I have posted lots
comment trading would be greatly appreciated!

P.S> I know it sounds deadmau5y but I started rolling and got to a point where there was no going back!

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Re: Reason 6 First Track

Postby Rook » Thu Apr 12, 2012 9:31 pm

I actually think it sounds much more unique than anything I've heard from Deadmau5. You've got some really neat sounding synths going on. The drums have a nice thump/punch to them. One thing I might would say is work on that first synth that comes in on the intro a bit. Sounded a little thin/weak when put on top of that thumping drum track.
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Re: Reason 6 First Track

Postby NYfree83 » Thu Apr 12, 2012 10:19 pm

Nice man. I like everything after the 2min mark. I think the initial build up needs some work (maybe a filter sweep, hall kicks?) but other then that well done.
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Re: Reason 6 First Track

Postby 42TheFloorBeats » Fri Apr 13, 2012 1:14 am

Thanks guys, I got that synth volume down and then it comes up just letting the bass line shine a bit but yeah I'll give a listen with it full volume. The intro I wanted it kick free just cuz I wanted that contrast! I'll play around a bit thanks for the tips!
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Re: Reason 6 First Track

Postby ImAJenius » Thu Apr 19, 2012 1:31 pm

Im not that into deadmau5 but this a very nice track, you've got me into it now.
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Re: Reason 6 First Track

Postby onewaylimited » Thu Apr 19, 2012 1:38 pm

Nice track! I think the intro was a little long and boring (I'm impatient) But after 2.00 The song drops and its awesome!!! I really like the ambient synth on top of the crazy bassline the still retains a MELODY (which some artists feel is not needed :evil: ) I love this track!
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Re: Reason 6 First Track

Postby DayOne » Thu Apr 19, 2012 2:41 pm

Love this track man! The bass is really nice with the melody, not sure why I love really ambient and relaxing synths with nice dirty basslines!

Just a note, that synth at the end is pretty high, might just be my headphones, maybe EQ out the high end on it a little?
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Re: Reason 6 First Track

Postby 42TheFloorBeats » Thu Apr 19, 2012 3:08 pm

Heard yo! Thanks for the feedback. @NYfree83/onewaylimited I am kinda feeling the same way about the intro, at first when I made the song I loved how long and drawn out it was but now that I have listened to it to many times it is a bit boring, I really want to build it with no drums that the goal. # DayOne yeah that high screecher is high n peircing a bit I like the pain but I will screw around with it in a week or so after this remix i'm working on is done.

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Re: Reason 6 First Track

Postby 42TheFloorBeats » Thu Apr 19, 2012 3:09 pm

oh yeah DayOne that veela track is sick I love swing by her page every now and again, that particular song scares my girlfriend tho, is that what you were going for errr?!
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Re: Reason 6 First Track

Postby DayOne » Thu Apr 19, 2012 3:48 pm

Haha, lol! How does it scare her? is it the tune or the picture for it?
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